dij
I feel so bad
I wish to tell
how I feel
for him so well
how despite
Many tellings
of how he can
hurt my feelings
I can't help
myself at all
I can't resist
i want ot fall
I want to wrap
myself in him
I want to die
I can not win.


2 Comments:
*blush*
I know it is supposed to be a joke(i think at least) but if you want to perfect it, instead of the last line being and so am i, have it somthing like, and I am to. Just a suggestion. Oh, and thanks a bunch for commenting! I love feedback!
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