Wednesday, August 25, 2004

dij

I feel so bad
I wish to tell
how I feel
for him so well

how despite
Many tellings
of how he can
hurt my feelings

I can't help
myself at all
I can't resist
i want ot fall

I want to wrap
myself in him
I want to die
I can not win.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

*blush*

August 28, 2004 at 4:51 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I know it is supposed to be a joke(i think at least) but if you want to perfect it, instead of the last line being and so am i, have it somthing like, and I am to. Just a suggestion. Oh, and thanks a bunch for commenting! I love feedback!

August 30, 2004 at 4:51 PM  

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